Third in line, the belly of the Giant
Words aplenty to describe our find
Long and tiring was the journey of 150
Not to mention it was too dusty
Race against time to see the sunset
Just in time, but the clouds upset
Frozen to death - "Oh what the hell!"
As the clouds moved away, the lights too fell
Pitch darkness fell after five
A saving grace was the stars in the sky
Our cameras searched the blackness in despair
Mountains of darkness stood all mighty - but we didn't care
For the jewel of the crown was hidden
A mighty view forbidden
All was for naught, we cried
"Oh! Don't fret my child..."
A soft glow whispered from the peaks
A saviour gracefully rising from the East
"Oh look!" Light drizzled upon the snow
The mighty began to finally show
The orb of the night arouse in splendour
The creatures on Earth were struck in wonder
As the snowcap basked in moonlight glory
A scene was etched in our life story
Night passed and the moon switched sides
Before dawn our eyes opened wide
We stood as the cold winds blew
The mountain's shine in the moonlight grew
And oh so silently a piece of sky turned gold
That such a beauty existed I was never told
Rays of the sun touched the giants head
With each blink, the colour spread
Majesty that dwarves anything before it
White, Gold and Red it was lit
Under the blue sky, such clear view
An opportunity that befalls on so few
For irony abounds good fortune
Nature plays a weird tune
Left and Right, cameras set to fly
Unnoticed, a pale moon said Goodbye
(Moonlit Kanchenjunga - Photo by Praveen A)
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Nice, nothing astounding or breathtaking., just nice...
ReplyDeleteas how truthful art is supposed to be, self defined and elementarily simple. But from a reader perspective,
Poetry has a natural tendency to be dull, it's the Poet's job to surprise the reader. It would really help if the Poet could be less self aware,
We killed Poetry around a fifty years ago with Free Verse, And it's nearly impossible to bring it back to life., for that we need a completely new and broad approach, which nobody has.
Thanks a Lot
DeleteNo more better way to pen down the magnificence of the himalayas .
ReplyDeleteThank you bro.. For letting me see that divine scene through your words
Thanks a lot Man
Deleteamazing use of words.. I can relive the experience the more i read ..thanks
ReplyDeleteThanks a Lot Bro
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